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Post by Shauna on Mar 25, 2005 18:00:37 GMT -5
Heres my fic: www.fanfiction.net/s/1883771/1/It's about before Jak and Daxter: TPL. Hope you enjoy it! If you have any ideas about next chapters, post them here, cause with I've got the most awful writers block. And School. So, I'd be happy to receive any ideas! I'll post here when the next chappies up!
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 25, 2005 22:00:21 GMT -5
As how I understood TPL history, some things doesn't fit in my head, but who cares!?!? it's just a fanfic, well it's a fanfic now but it can grow or not?
I'm reading it now
*Imagines young Kiera*
CUTE!!
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 26, 2005 1:20:50 GMT -5
I have reached the 20th chapter 15 minutes ago, it's chido but I have just one question:
What age do Keira and Jak have at the chapter 20? Are they 12?
Sorry if I missed something
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Post by Shauna on Mar 26, 2005 5:09:35 GMT -5
Yea, They're twelve. i was gonna make them older, but I forgot to...
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 26, 2005 15:21:55 GMT -5
Yes, I knew I was right, it's just that having 12 and they are acting like 15 or 14, don't know but it's a good fanfic
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Post by Shauna on Mar 27, 2005 5:00:03 GMT -5
As how I understood TPL history, some things doesn't fit in my head, but who cares!?!? it's just a fanfic, well it's a fanfic now but it can grow or not? I'm reading it now *Imagines young Kiera* CUTE!! I wrote this before I even knew Jak 3 existed, so thats probably why some things don't fit.
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Post by Shauna on Mar 27, 2005 11:08:32 GMT -5
Yes, I knew I was right, it's just that having 12 and they are acting like 15 or 14, don't know but it's a good fanfic Yeah... I updated my fic and just said in the Author's note that I forgot to say that they were older in a previous chapter. So, like I said Chapter 21 is up!
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 28, 2005 0:41:43 GMT -5
Chapter 21? Chido!
*goes to check*
*returns*
Yes, it's there and I'll read it now, and the things that I don't understand don't have nothing to do with Jak 3, they are about TPL but who cares? It's a good fanfic.
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Post by Shauna on Mar 28, 2005 4:37:53 GMT -5
Chapter 21? Chido! *goes to check* *returns* Yes, it's there and I'll read it now, and the things that I don't understand don't have nothing to do with Jak 3, they are about TPL but who cares? It's a good fanfic. Oh, right. I thought the PL history was easy to understand... oh well...
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 28, 2005 14:17:58 GMT -5
Yes, it's easy but I remember, I'm not sure but I remember someone saying "...that mounsters that have appeared in the last days" and here I see that the lurkers are there since Jak was little, also I know that Jak talks but I think he's very silent must off the time, or other things that I don't get but just part of my theories
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Post by Shauna on Mar 28, 2005 16:21:09 GMT -5
Yes, it's easy but I remember, I'm not sure but I remember someone saying "...that mounsters that have appeared in the last days" and here I see that the lurkers are there since Jak was little, also I know that Jak talks but I think he's very silent must off the time, or other things that I don't get but just part of my theories About the guy saying that... I don't remember that at all. Oh well. And about Jak not talking, I don't believe that, I just think that Daxter constantly interrupted him. Like when they met the Blue Sage? Jak opened his mouth, but Dax jumped in and started talking. That's just my theory though...
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Post by Cheetoz on Mar 28, 2005 16:57:17 GMT -5
I believe that Jak talks but just a little, just three words:
SHS, silent hero sindrome
And during TPL he tries to talk like 3...4 times? He doesn't talks too much, I think
And I'm not sure about the guy saying that, but I remember something like that, obviously in spanish, so I don't know how he says it in english
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Post by Kirby on Apr 2, 2005 20:05:24 GMT -5
Oooohhhh *eating newly invented copcorn*
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Post by DarkDax on Apr 5, 2005 2:44:23 GMT -5
:'(i want more all this fan-fic writing buisness takes to long
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Post by Shauna on Apr 5, 2005 3:11:17 GMT -5
Sorry, I was planning to write some more this week, but I suddenly wanted to play Final Fantasy 8, so that's what I've been doing. I'll try and get another chapter up sometime, OK? ;D
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