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Post by Cheetoz on May 6, 2005 22:16:36 GMT -5
Interesting
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 10:54:42 GMT -5
I excel on dark poems, wanna hearone that isn't a haiku?
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Post by Cheetoz on May 7, 2005 11:25:23 GMT -5
Let's see what you have ...............
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Post by Shauna on May 7, 2005 12:26:46 GMT -5
Nice... Go on let's hear those Poems. ;D Always hated writing poems. ;D
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 12:34:55 GMT -5
Shadows of Darkness, Shadowsof hate Will you let these guide your fate? Will you break away..... Or will you stay For them to be your eternal doom? Will you trust them? Or will your turn your back on them never to return? If you stay...... will there be any more happy days? NO, you will suffer for ever! The joys of life you'll have again never......
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 12:35:09 GMT -5
What do you think?
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Post by Cheetoz on May 7, 2005 12:36:30 GMT -5
Chido....... May I ask who's your inspiration??
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 12:38:48 GMT -5
None really, except maybe my hard times in life
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Post by Cheetoz on May 7, 2005 12:44:27 GMT -5
OK............
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 12:50:16 GMT -5
Another haiku
The shadow of death passes Claiming the lives of innocents In this cruel, sad, dark world
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Post by Shauna on May 7, 2005 12:52:33 GMT -5
The poem and the Haiku are cool. ;D
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 12:58:43 GMT -5
Thanks, it's good to hear, cause you know what I'm aiming for when I'm living on my own?
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Post by Cheetoz on May 7, 2005 13:07:43 GMT -5
Sounds interesting, but you should have some more ideas
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Post by Platform Master on May 7, 2005 16:59:51 GMT -5
Lava into fire Seeds into gorgeous flowers Change is all around............
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Post by Cheetoz on May 7, 2005 17:55:53 GMT -5
How deep..........
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