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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 20:05:25 GMT -5
Thanks..how many haikus is that? 10 haikus 1 dark poem ;D
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 20:25:18 GMT -5
Make it 11!
The shadows conceal The hate and death of the world In it's pitch black cloak
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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 20:34:08 GMT -5
Make it 11! The shadows conceal The hate and death of the world In it's pitch black cloak Ok, 11......I'll have the count ok?? Good haiku P-master
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 20:35:22 GMT -5
O.k. you keep count............
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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 20:45:12 GMT -5
Yes!! Sir!! *takes out block and pencil*
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 20:47:47 GMT -5
The winds of our fates Blow oh so softly right now Our life will be good
The winds of our fates Blow swiftly with no mercy Lives are hard right now
Two Haikus..............
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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 20:58:20 GMT -5
13.........
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 21:02:05 GMT -5
This next one I wrote a month ago and just found:
Lights Glow in Heave Fire brings death to all in Hell Which will you choose
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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 21:06:03 GMT -5
I'll choose both!!!!!!!! ehmmm........14.....
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 21:07:35 GMT -5
I figured yo uwould Mr. Hybrid..............
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Post by Cheetoz on May 8, 2005 21:11:42 GMT -5
I figured yo uwould Mr. Hybrid.............. You know I couldn't stop ;D
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 22:35:23 GMT -5
The smell of food The sight of a warm bed Some have never had
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Post by Platform Master on May 8, 2005 23:31:07 GMT -5
The safety of home Or the thrill of adventure We choose only one
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Post by Shauna on May 9, 2005 1:12:06 GMT -5
Nice ;D And, 16
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Post by Platform Master on May 9, 2005 17:38:06 GMT -5
There are many paths We must choose one to follow Destiny awaits...........
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